Evocative descriptive writing

Date: 22nd Nov 2021 @ 2:11pm

Temi's Descriptive Writing


In Year 6 we have been reading The Promise By Nicola Davies. The story takes place in a hard, mean and ugly city where the citizens resort to stealing from one another to survive. One day, one of the citizens comes across a bag of acorns and begins to plant them. After that, everything changes…

 We have been learning how to use figurative language, including metaphors, similes and personification. We really enjoyed this book and we hope you reading our descriptive writing. Check out Temi's beautiful descriptive writing.  I am so impressed with his use of similes and metaphors. 

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